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  1. REVIEW I enjoyed reading your thoughts on and from Florida Man! Your writing is nice and flows very well, no grammatical errors stood out either. My only real issue and proposition would be to maybe work on the formatting of your post a tad bit? Break up the text into a couple of paragraphs and it turns out much more readable and presentable! Other than that the article is top notch, interesting content and very nice writing skills on your part. I understand you usually do graphics, but definitely don't knock yourself on your writing! 8/10
  2. REVIEW Love love love this! An absolutely amazing idea for a media spot an an equally perfect execution of that idea. You took the time to honor your players in a way most of them haven't experiaced before and it reads in a very nice wholesome way even for someone entirely on the outside. Bravo! One little downside for me is it seems you've set the color of the text to black? Which makes reading the article in darkmode impossible - but that's nitpicking really. 10/10
  3. 1. I love the whole atmosphere, the decorations, the music. 2. I spent it with my gf's family, wonderful time! 3. I don't follow the NHL so no clue. 4. I just want the time I spend with my family. Wow that came out corny. 5. Yes, I always get everyone presents! I love seeing the look on their faces. 6. Christmas show? I don't think I understand what that means.
  4. Robert Wilk on his perspectives in the Warsaw Predators Robert Wilk is working hard to make his way to the VHL proper and graduate from the VHLE. While his time in the Rome Gladiators was less than ideal, the team did manage to make their way all the way into the Playoff Finals. Now the young polish right wing is hardly seen outside of either a gym or the rink. This is quite a departure from his form earlier during the season, when he was hardly seen outside of a McDonalds or his coach with a gamepad in his hands. Rumor has it this sudden burst of motivation came from none other than Warsaw Predators GM. He had a sit down talk with the young Wilk about the possibility of him being called up. The trust that was shown in his potential as an offensive tool made him reconsider his approach to training for games. Motivation is the most important thing in any professional’s player’s repertoire. And now thanks to his VHL coach, Robert Wilk’s got plenty of it. He is looking forward to making the best of his time with the Predators and really turning his career around. Time will see how it goes.
  5. Robert Wilk looks back on his time in the VHLE The young Polish player was extremely excited graduating from the VHLM. His role on the San Diego Marlins was that of Captain in more than name. On that team he was tasked with taking over the offense completely – he spent the entirety of his VHLM season fighting for the top spot of the scoring leaderboards. When he was drafted to the Rome Gladiators of the VHLE he was beyond excited. Being a solid pick in that draft he was hopeful to take on a reasonably high role on the squad. He knew of course that he would no longer be in the M, where a player of his caliber could call himself a star, but he had hoped to still be one of the team’s main scorers. Unfortunately things turned out quite differently in reality. Robert Wilk kept on struggling throughout the season, barely scoring any goals at all. The team didn’t trust him with taking charge of the offense at all – which was obviously understandable with how he was playing. Being relegated to second and third string in the lineup definitely did no good for the young bucks confidence. Wilk got around 15 minutes a game throughout the season and never made any real strides to get better than he was at the beginning. Word around the league was the player stopped practicing as hard as he used to after his rough start, which certainly did him no favors at all, especially considering his playtime. Around the playoffs the team seemed to change their minds considering Robert. He was given more time on the ice and closer to what his touches used to be in the M. Robert did quite well for himself during the playoffs, securing a nice amount of goals. What’s more important than that, he played an instrumental part in helping take the Rome Gladiators to the VHLE Playoff Finals. It would unfortunately end up being a loss in that ultimate challenge, with the Gladiators falling in four games flat. Robert Wilk however is now looking ahead to the future. With his confidence relit after the responsibility he was given in the Playoffs, Wilk got excited once again about taking the ice. With talk with the Warsaw Predators from the VHL getting back on track Robert started working out hard and taking the ice on his off time practicing. Warsaw Management has been very clear about looking forward to seeing him make his way up to the VHL and that was an amazing boost to his failing confidence. And so it comes to now, when the young polish right wing is doing his damn hardest to make it. Getting his skills in place and his form ready to go for the top level’s of the VHL is no easy task. Fortunately with support from the Warsaw Predator’s coaching staff and support crew it is very clear he is going to make it. Let’s all look forward to how Wilk will do in the big leagues!
  6. REVIEW As somebody that doesn't follow the league that closely on a day by day basis I always appreciate these kinds of recaps! You've done a good job to explain how and why these teams are close together in the standings. It was concise and understandable, though could probably use some more formatting! Overall good work. 7.5/10
  7. REVIEW Very unique approach to PTs here! I dig the blogpost idea honestly, I haven't really seen anything like it before. While it might not be the most refined form of Article it reads well and is pretty fun. Good job! 8/10
  8. Old PC but oh well. 1. Still just a prospect, but extremely happy to be here! 2. The grind. I like to consider myself a hard worker despite my comparatively low earning. 3. Not really - hockey isn't big in my country. 4. That dope ass logo! 5. Well you can guess haha! Clearly Warsaw. 6. If I have to choose... definitely you @Underclass_Hero! I've loved working with you whenever we've gotten the chance. Truly a great person to talk with and share ideas.
  9. Robert Wilk preparing to graduate into the VHL The young Right Wing from Poland – Robert Wilk has been working hard to make his way into the VHL as soon as he is able to. Ideally he would like to try and make it to the Warsaw Predators roster this coming season. While he appreciates what he has learned in the VHLE playing for the Rome Gladiators, he’s still delegated to a bench role on the team. If he can’t make it into the VHL and his dream team, he’ll make it his goal to take over a larger role for Rome. Wilk truly believes he has what it takes to be a star – be it in the VHLE or in the VHL. It’s just a matter of time until he gets to that level of play on the ice. It remains to be seen how long it will take him to make it in either league though.
  10. Robert Wilk Tough Time with Lessened Role It’s tough for any player not a top prospect going up in the world of pro sports. After being on top of the world in the Minors, scoring tons of goals every game and seeing his name in the top of the leaderboards for goals scored and points, Robert Wilk now finds himself playing 15 minutes a game in the VHLE and barely amounting to anything in that time. He of course understands that he’s just not good enough to be given a bigger role on a team this good it’s still a tough transition from Captain of the San Diego Marlins to a bench player responsible only for backing up the real stars on the team. It’s a bit harder to stay motivated for sure with a lessened role, but Wilk is trying his hardest to still improve and show the coach he’s worth it.
  11. REVIEW Interviews are indeed fun! I liked your way of making your player really come to life with your answers. Read well and felt like a genuine interview which really just means its great man! Awesome job, keep it up. 9/10
  12. REVIEW I wish you all the best with your cat! I hope you find him soon, I really feel you for this. As for the article itself... well it's not much of an VHL article but you know that for sure. I hope you feel better soon and can get back to writing great articles, but this one is just here for earning and it shows. 5/10
  13. 1. Marlins! I love the colors honestly, that's the winner for me. 2. Homer here - Gladiators baby! Very cool branding and the logo is as good as it. 3. Predators no doubt. Love the wolf styling. 4. Gabby Dugan has been rocking house on both ends. Great player. 5. Biggie Cheese! Crazy good player and +/- doesn't lie 6. I'm betting Istambul. Great team.
  14. REVIEW Love to hear from a fellow Rome player. Marner's been doing great and this article is also great! I loved the formatting, made it easy to read and follow which is a huge plus. The writing was clear and understandable with some but not too much stat dropping. Great job here. 8.5/10
  15. REVIEW It's always nice to hear what a player does in the offseason. I would have liked to see some formatting in the article though. Some division into paragraphs, just to make it more readable would be a good start for sure. Overall I liked what you wrote here - interesting content just lacking in formatting. 7/10
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