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Doomsday

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  1. Content: 3/3 - As a big fan of classic rock, I loved your choices for the songs. Great tracks and it gives me hope to see that people love the good stuff as opposed to Miley Bieber. Grammar: 1.5/2 - Ball caught all of it, nothing to add. Just remember that spell check won't catch every mistake, so be sure to carefully go through it when you're done to catch stuff like this. Appearance: 1/1 - Absolutely. Overall: 5.5/6 - It's still a six! FINAL: 6/6
  2. If it's still there when I grade this, it's getting a zero for appearance.
  3. Should've listened to Jimmy V, buddy.
  4. If you're worried about a conflict of interest, you can wait until the off-season to start.
  5. If you want to be an Assistant GM, it could be a good first step towards getting a VHLM GM spot. The Assistant GM job in Oslo is yours if you'd like.
  6. Oslo withdraws their claim on Logan Laich. Continuing this carnival of shenanigans, Oslo claims Ashton Galbraith.
  7. Oslo withdraws their claim for Galbraith. Oslo claims Logan Laich.
  8. Oslo claims Ashton Galbraith.
  9. Got bored, made my DT. Expect a powerhouse nose tackle for his build.
  10. Was an absolute blast to finally fly this bad boy.
  11. Content: 3/3 - Even when only counting the analysis of the game, it covers the requirements. An interesting look back at the VHL's beginnings and I'm sure it waxes plenty of nostalgia for those that were here for that. Even for those that weren't, like me, it allows us to get a glimpse of those days, which is awesome. Grammar: 2/2 - Pretty solid. people came a showed up = people came and showed up Appearance: 1/1 - Yuppers. Overall: 6/6 -
  12. Content: 3/3 - There seems to be something comforting when you're in a bad situation and you can look back and see how much worse some folks had it. This article just streamlines the whole process. History is fun! Grammar: 2/2 - Practically flawless. playoff birth = playoff berth (multiple times) Appearance: 1/1 - Absolutely. Overall: 6/6 - USA! USA! USA!
  13. Content: 3/3 - I liked last week's article and this one went into even more depth. I think it'd be neat if you could do this for individual players once all the teams have been covered. Grammar: 2/2 - Some silly errors, but for the length of the piece, not enough to dock. Yea = Yeah offseason = off-season Namoi Young = Naomi Young curveball = curve ball Were at the halfway mark = We're at the halfway mark Appearance: 1/1 - Oh yeah. Overall: 6/6 -
  14. Remember, "backups" still play regularly in GLB.
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