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Overview 2/2 Got everything thats needed Pros & Cons 3/3 Pretty good, could've gone a bit more indepth but still good enough. Grammar 1.75/2 Taron got most of it, there were quite a few commas save on the initial shot, he can react very quickly - shot, and he can react very quickly Presentation 1/1 Looks good Overall 5.75/6 Final 6/6

Content 3/3 good article Grammar 2/2 Not much to find the the - the Appearance 1/1 Looks good

Overviewe 2/2 Great job here Pros & Cons 1.25/3 Like Tylar said this is supposed to be the main part of the rookie profile and was too short Grammar 2/2 do to speed restrictions - due to Presentation 1/1 Looks good Overall 6.25/8 Final 6/8

Context 3/3 Asian lessons and the moist eggroll, go drown yourself in a river and I think there were a lot of interesting ideas, I think possibly reading snippets of your books could work Professionalism: 2/2 Good enough Editing: 1/1 yup sounds good Overall 6/6

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Overview 2/2 Pretty good everything required is there Pros & Cons 1.5/3 Like Tylar said, its a bit short, try to go more in-depth on them since they're supposed to be the main part of the rookie profile. Grammar 2/2 Not much else to fine, couple of run on sentences however Presentation 1/1 Looks good Overall 6.5/8 Final 6/8

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Overview 5/5 Yup, everything needed is there Grammar 3/3 Nothing really to find middle east = Middle East Presentation 1/1 Looks good Over 1000 words 1/1 Yup Overall 10/10

Content 2.5/3 Good article but a bit short, try to get it to at least 450 words Grammar 2/2 Pretty good no where - nowhere Ottawa lynk - Ottawa Lynx Appearance 1/1 Good, but try to add some pictures next time Overall 5.5/6 Final 5/6

Content 3/3 Good article, hopefully your success can continue. Grammar 2/2 not much Chuck Goody’sthe third period goal - chuck goody's third period goal Appearance 1/1 Looks good Overall 6/6

Content 3/3 good article Grammar 2/2 Nothing to find Appearance 1/1 Looks good Overall 6/6

Pick the winner, all three correct will earn 1 TPE (N/A is an answer here) Game 5: Brampton Blades vs Bern Royals - Brampton Game 6: Bern Royals vs Brampton Blades - Bern Game 7: Brampton Blades vs Bern Royals - N/A Predict the score, Correctly predict the score and winner for 3 TPE Game 5: Brampton Blades vs Bern Royals - 4-2 Brampton Predict the leading point earner of the series for 1 TPE Tim TebowGow Predict the leading penalty minutes earner for 1 TPE Golden Jedtsson Predict the leading special teams goals earner for 1 TPE Tim TebowGow

Context 3/3 Good podcast, let me copy your VHFL team next time plz, good luck in the finals. Professionalism: 2/2 Yup Editing: 1/1 Sounds good Overall: 6/6

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Pick the winner, all three correct will earn 1 TPE (N/A is an answer here) Game 5: @ - Seattle Game 6: @ - Cologne Game 7: @ - N/A Predict the score, Correctly predict the score and winner for 3 TPE Game 5: @ - 3-2 Cologne Predict the leading point earner of the series for 1 TPE Bismarck Köenig Predict the leading penalty minutes earner for 1 TPE Christoph Klose Predict the leading special teams goals earner for 1 TPE Bismarck Köenig

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