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I wish @Noah!! was still around so he could make a fun Jigglejawns sig.

And so we say goodbye to an era, as E'Twaun Delicious is officially ending his VHL career. He was truly a shitty player, I picked a bad time to abandon him as he was good enough to be treated by the sim like a top level player, taking shots like no one's business, but not good enough to actually convert at anything nearing a good rate. I ran the numbers the other day and Delicious was, among players with at least 2,500 career shots, either 101st out of 113 or 103rd out of 111 in career shooting percentage (obviously that's through S49). Yuck. Time to make my seventh VHL player, and believe it or not, my first defenseman! Woo!

I don't waive my yes-trade clause. #ontocologne

Feedback: Not bad, pretty clean and appealing. You got the blending down for sure; the lighting is a tiny bit too strong, and the background could definitely use more to it. Text could use more work as well; I typically stay away from lowercase subtext unless it's a very stylized font like Jane Austen or Olde English.

Feedback: Nice one. I like that you used a grungy brush font as the main text despite your very clean style, it definitely makes this unique. Bottom subtext is a bit hard to read, and there's a bit too many of the lighting bubbles throughout but those are minor complaints.

Feedback: I love this sig. Blending, feel, text, it's on point. Only minor complaints would be to tone down the render effects a tiny bit, do a little bit more with the negative space around the edges and maybe add a light source, but that would just take a 9.9 out of 10 to a straight 10 in my eyes. Great work!

Feedback: I like this one. Render effects and feel are on point. Lighting is a tad too strong and the background could use a little bit more to it. I like the main text but the e in Marcel is a bit hard to read. Good shit using Jane Austen as a subfont, I've never seen anyone do that before but I like it.

Feedback: Render effects are slick as hell. The background is smooth and clean but could use some more going on. Lighting is a bit too strong, and I'm not a big fan of the fonts on the subtext or the clipping mask on the main text.

Feedback: Text and render need to be blended more. The background kinda suffers from having all the negative space without much going on, and as someone told you in another thread, try to avoid color burn in most situations.

Feedback: There are some positives and negatives to this sig. I really like the background, you definitely nailed that. Blob lighting and the left side of the sig are too bright, and the B/W render doesn't really fit here. The text is also really basic, could use a gradient and a supplement with some subtext.

Feedback: Nice, I really like this one. Text, coloring, lighting, everything's really smooth. Maybe add a little bit more texture to the background to have a little more going on in the sig.

Apparently my Well Extrapolated Entertainment Novella isn't for everyone.

E’Twaun Delicious is now over halfway through his final season in the VHL. After a rough seventh season, where he finished below 55 points, Delicious has bounced back this year. He’s logged 27 goals and 51 points while shooting a passable 9.6%. The New York Americans have fallen on hard times as they begin a rebuild, but Delicious has the best +/- of any human player on the roster as a -4 despite playing nearly as many minutes as team leader Edwin Reencarnacion. Moving forward, the Muffins Agency will begin work on securing papers to bring over Greek defenseman Aschylus Jigglejawns CXXXVII. A talented balanced defenseman, Jigglejawns CXXXVII will look to boost the profile of Greek hockey as one of the best hockey players to come from the country. There has been talk that the young defenseman, a lifelong fan of the New York Americans, may refuse to play for his favorite team in favor of experiencing what else the league has to offer. More on that when details arise.

Delicious has been absolutely filthy these past couple games.

Who said you could edit my post?

How dare you say that about Alfie?

oops wrong thread

Hmm I might be interested...

Delicious been extra tasty today

scrumptious

Feedback 701 strikes again. I like the composition of the sig, grunge is really hard to pull off considering how popular the clean look is among sig makers the past couple years but you got it going. Things like lighting and blending really bring this together. Only (very slight) critique is to tone down the blur in the bottom left corner a bit.

Feedback I like the vibe you got going here, very creative. Not sure how well the style of render effects really mesh with the font or background choice though. This could be one of your best with some more work to be better put together, but you have a really interesting base here.

Feedback I like this one a lot. The background looks great and the render's yellow jersey vibes with the blue and purple that you got going on here much better than I figured it ever would. The lighting's a bit strong and would be better served moved over to the right so it hits the render's face rather than just his shoulder, and the left side of the main text can definitely be tough to read.

Feedback Very trippy. creative and cool to look at. Main thing I can say is that the sig feels overexposed to me, the 'buddy' text is also a tad hard to read being a darker purple with dark blue behind it, but overall the feel is prime, lighting is strong and blending is top notch.