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Claimed:HEY MOM IM ACTIVE [Final: 6/6]


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effort: 2/2 - Can't complain, cause activity! 

 

look: 2.5/3 - A couple things kill this for me. The font, and the lighting. It's too overdone with the lighting. Had this small glare been applied to parts of the sig and not all of it, you'd find that you'd have much better lighting techniques. As such, the font is just kind of there, and I'd like to see it closer to the render and meshing more with the rest of the graphic. 

 

creativity: 1/1 - Yeah! 

 

total: 5.5/6

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Effort: 2/2 - Stock work, lighting, text, definitely enough.

Look: 2.5/3 - I have to agree that this is too bright, particularly on the render. I think doing more lighting that isn't from stocks would help here. Also, I think the render could be blended better with the background, maybe with some more subtle, darker stock work. Personally, I like the text a lot, but I think maybe you should make "Griffin" smaller, and move the text closer to the render.

Creativity: 1/1

Total: 5.5/6

FINAL GRADE: 6/6

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