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  • Paramorise changed the title to Zeptenbergs

Effort 2/2: i'd say there's enough here.

Look 2.5/3: about how I said the last few sigs you made were too washed out: this one has the same problem except its too dark. its really hard to make out the focal point. also this one needs some more work on lighting and text for full marks from me. 

Creativity 1/1: sure

Overall: 5.5/6

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  • Tim changed the title to Zeptenbergs [needs second grade]
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Effort 2/2: I can definitely see the effort you put in here.

Look 2.5/3: Everything seems a little hazy, not sure if it's the stock work that's doing it or the lack of lighting but it needs to be fixed. Get some good contrast in there and make some things pop. Its okay to have dark spots as long as there are bright spots as well to focus the eye. Speaking of which, the text (which also needs some work BTW) is the focal point which should NEVER happen. The render is heavily blended but it looks like the text is slapped on top which draws the eye toard it way too easily.

Creativity 1/1: I'll give you this

Overall: 5.5/6

Final: 6/6

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