701 309 Posted February 11, 2016 Share Posted February 11, 2016 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/28131-claimedak47-22/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack 498 Posted February 14, 2016 Share Posted February 14, 2016 Great grunge piece. Great mood and grit going on. I think a bit more text work would help out, maybe cutting it up a little bit to add to the grunginess. Stock work is good, but does feel a bit flat. Nice piece overall. Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/28131-claimedak47-22/#findComment-311706 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Commissioner Beketov 9,033 Posted February 15, 2016 Commissioner Share Posted February 15, 2016 A little too much going on for me personally. Some blending, lighting, or depth work could have really helped to bring the eye toward the render. Right now it goes straight to the text for me because of how bright it is. Overall, everything goes well together and blends well, it's just all a tad distracting. A few curves or exposure layers could balance everything out beautifully. Amazing stock and text work BTW. Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/28131-claimedak47-22/#findComment-311880 Share on other sites More sharing options...
boubabi 4,725 Posted February 16, 2016 Share Posted February 16, 2016 I think there's too much going on too. The contrasts are kinda fucked up, which makes the texture seems lq. Plus, considering there's a lot going on, there's no real focal point, which is bothering too. I think a slightly darker edges and reducing some of the light source else where your principal one, it could be better. Everything else is looking good Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/28131-claimedak47-22/#findComment-312059 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tim 182 Posted February 18, 2016 Share Posted February 18, 2016 Claimed Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/28131-claimedak47-22/#findComment-312624 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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