gorlab 4,321 Posted October 28, 2016 Share Posted October 28, 2016 this guy got drafted in phil's AS podcast pt 1.... if i need to add 1 text layer saying all-star I will, but we're beyond that point IMO. Phil 1 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/34922-claimedasw-doubles-12-reviewed/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
Commissioner Beketov 9,043 Posted October 31, 2016 Commissioner Share Posted October 31, 2016 I'm seeing a lot of things here that are very close to where you want them but not quite there. The blue and orange could work very well but I think the shade of orange you chose is slightly under-saturated for what you wanted to achieve. Your lighting is also very stark and nice but you placed the source on the wrong side of the render. All the light on his face (and in the BG) is on the right side but you placed the light on the left, it's visually confusing. Blending is alright and stock work is alright but just pay attention to the little things to really elevate your work. gorlab 1 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/34922-claimedasw-doubles-12-reviewed/#findComment-383239 Share on other sites More sharing options...
boubabi 4,725 Posted November 13, 2016 Share Posted November 13, 2016 the idea behind it was good, but not executed perfectly imo. lets start on the light on his back/shoulder, it shoulder go over his body imo. the light should be on the right side since the light from his face comes from the right. the font is a little bit too big for my liking, and should be closer to the render. you did better, keep them coming tho Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/34922-claimedasw-doubles-12-reviewed/#findComment-385869 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kendrick 4,741 Posted November 14, 2016 Share Posted November 14, 2016 Claimed Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/34922-claimedasw-doubles-12-reviewed/#findComment-386066 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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