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[Frank 4,757]

 

For St. Laurent

 

 

[boubabi 4,725]

 

[Exlaxchronicles 415]

Very colorful render! Like that.

The BG is dark enough to offset the foreground ie.player. I find the SIG as a whole lacks some clarity/sharpness to it bit maybe thats the look you were going for. It has a cool looking cartoon feel to it,maybe due to the saturation? Idk, but I def like how you've done it.

The color scheme is bold and pops out even without the sharpness.

The lighting source is just a tad too bright for me, I'd rather see it dialed down to a lesser harshness. And That light next to his helmet is kindve distracting.

The two styled font is decent and the fact you can see through Laurent is cool but maybe a thicker/darker border around would make it not so inconspicuous. It needs to stand out more. BTW, I've noticed its the same your avatar...like my elementary report cards used to say " A little more effort is needed" !!