Tim 182 Posted January 1, 2018 Share Posted January 1, 2018 DollarAndADream and Tyler 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Exlaxchronicles 415 Posted January 22, 2018 Share Posted January 22, 2018 To start off with...Nice to meet you Tim! Ok, Your BG almost seems like a mixture of night sky and cloud cover. It looks pretty decent to me. Not really liking how harsh that ball of light is.I think it would've look a little better less concentrated and more dispersed,as it really doesn't match the continuity of the rest of the lighting onto the player. It looks good with a slight blurred BG in contrast to the more sharpness of the player. Pretty cool as well how you have the bottom left cloud and right shoulder submerged into it! The jersey has a pinch too much contrast to it but it helps separate him from the BG colours. His mug seems a bit too saturated bit its still good. My main whine is the font. The color is too dark for me as there's not enough clarity to make it pop out. Dark on dark doesn't work very well.Maybe a light border around the font or a lighter font would be more aesthetically pleasing. Good job Tim! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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