Guy LeGrande #4 [2/2]

[Steve 1,715]

[Motzaburger 1,590]

7 hours ago, Steve said:

Review

 

Doug! I feel like the pic is stretched. There is too much red and the bg is too much of a similar colour to the face and blood on him. I'd love to see it be a smaller sig so you're not trying to fill all the room. I think the text has too much embossing on it. Good job, hit me up if you want any help or need some tips!

[Steve 1,715]

5 hours ago, Motzaburger said:

Review

 

Doug! I feel like the pic is stretched. There is too much red and the bg is too much of a similar colour to the face and blood on him. I'd love to see it be a smaller sig so you're not trying to fill all the room. I think the text has too much embossing on it. Good job, hit me up if you want any help or need some tips!

Who Is Doug?

[Acydburn 1,555]

39 minutes ago, Steve said:

Who Is Doug?

Doug is the guy that Sean William Scott plays in goon.

[Steve 1,715]

Doug got hit so many times, he can't remember his own name. Thanks Acyd.

5 minutes ago, Acydburn said:

Doug is the guy that Sean William Scott plays in goon.

 

[jack 496]

Review: I think this is definitely an improvement from the last one I saw of yours. I can tell that you're trying new things and I hope you continue to experiment and improve! I agree with what Motza said, and I'll add that I'd like to see you try to add some stocks on top of the render/text. That would really help bring the entire piece together. Keep at it!