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Effort: 2/2 - Yep, just enough here to give you full marks.  

Look: 2/3 - I'm not sure if you did the cut yourself, but good job if you did.  I have quite a few issues with this, and I'll start with the render.  It's a little too bright, and stands out in comparison to the background.  I applaud you for trying some distortion in the background, but I don't think it works to well here.  I would try to erase some of the duped render to make the distortion effect a little bit better.  I like the text work on this and you did a good job with the clipping mask.  I would also blur the background to add some depth to it.  Try to play with stocks on top of the render to make the render blend a bit.  

Creativity: 1/1 - Yep.

 

Total: 5/6

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Effort: 2/2 - Sure

 

Look: 2/3 - Sherriff already wrote a paragraph saying pretty much everything else, so yeah: too bright + not a fan of the duped render + background displacement doesn't quite work + text is solid but a little difficult to read + there's an overall lack of depth.

 

Creativity: 1/1

 

Overall: 5/6  ➨  FINAL GRADE: 5/6

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