Luciano Valentino [1/2]

[Kekzkrieg 160]

[gorlab 4,321]

On 9/2/2019 at 8:35 PM, Kekzkrieg said:

 

 

clean little piece tbh. I like the composition of it in terms of render/text/stock positoning, and think your lighting looks pretty cool/eyepleasing. Personally I would've tried to stylize the render a bit more, since the redish lighting kind of makes him look sort of flat, and doesn't really contrast well with the yellow/blue of the stock uniform.

 

Also, there is some stock 'breaking' or lighting 'breaking' kind of around the player's glove (specifically to the right of the glove) which is noticable and is something if I noticed happened while making a sig, I would try to like blur it / smudge it / clone tool it out of the end product.

 

text looks dope and the render jersey name change is done pretty damn well tbh, and that's a hard thing to pull off.

 

i like the piece overall. I like your re-skinned one in your sig with ur drafted team, the front logo swap was ambitious af, I'll give you that.

 

 

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