Mr. Grumpy Bear 347 Posted December 9, 2014 Share Posted December 9, 2014 Boomcheck 1 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/15152-claimedstropko-rookie-profile-final-88/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
pxzero 65 Posted December 10, 2014 Share Posted December 10, 2014 Content: 5/5 Has everything that should be there. Well thought out, good points, and I loved the bonus articles/headlines. Grammar: 1/1 Missing a bunch of commas, but whatever. he would make it or not, and as the draft came and went, it was clear he didn't make the grade and he went undrafted. - commas write home about but, with his goal of playing...and his spot on the team secure, it was a... - commas problem by scouts, Stropko was overlooked completely - you guessed it While pondering his next move, Brady was - ditto In his rookie season for the Minot Gladiators, Stropko ran up an - who likes commas anyway? Appearance 2/1 Just wow. Over 500 words? 1/1 Yep Total: 9/8 rounded to a believable number of 8/8. Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/15152-claimedstropko-rookie-profile-final-88/#findComment-160393 Share on other sites More sharing options...
James 77 Posted December 19, 2014 Share Posted December 19, 2014 Claimed Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/15152-claimedstropko-rookie-profile-final-88/#findComment-165317 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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