OblivionWalker 292 Posted October 15 Share Posted October 15 (edited) I’m a thousand miles away tonight But my heart still beats your name. All I see and all I do Is woven through with you. No matter where I go from here, It’s you that’s on my mind. No distance is too great To keep my thoughts away from you. The lights that shine on me Hopefully smile on you too. The wind that ruffles through your hair Is the same that’ll mess up mine. The roads that take us both away Will converge again someday. A space now sits beside me Where you used to be, My arms that feel so empty now Will have you within them, dear. This separation hurts us both, But it means that this is real. So when you close your eyes tonight And rest that weary head, Please don’t be too sad And think you’re all alone. I’ll close my own and think of you Even a thousand miles away. (word count: 157) @kirbithan Edited October 15 by OblivionWalker LucyXpher, Aimee, ace_five_ and 2 others 5 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/152235-for-r/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
LucyXpher 1,578 Posted October 15 Share Posted October 15 This is beautiful Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/152235-for-r/#findComment-1041647 Share on other sites More sharing options...
OblivionWalker 292 Posted October 15 Author Share Posted October 15 2 minutes ago, LucyXpher said: This is beautiful Haven’t written poetry or lyrics for a hot minute so I figured it might be a good time to come up with something. Thank you very much! LucyXpher 1 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/152235-for-r/#findComment-1041648 Share on other sites More sharing options...
LucyXpher 1,578 Posted October 15 Share Posted October 15 10 minutes ago, OblivionWalker said: Haven’t written poetry or lyrics for a hot minute so I figured it might be a good time to come up with something. Thank you very much! That’s awesome! I’m glad you did, there’s not enough writing like this around here, so I love to see it! OblivionWalker 1 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/152235-for-r/#findComment-1041650 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Triller 1,688 Posted October 15 Share Posted October 15 Very nice! Unfortunately having kids means I now inherently try to read everything with a very positive tone and in a sing songy manner. It may cause a deviation from the intended emotional response lol Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/152235-for-r/#findComment-1041675 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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