Cuffy 346 Posted June 12, 2014 Share Posted June 12, 2014 First Hockey sig in a really long time but its an improvement imo Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/9075-claimedmarcus-hurley/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
sherifflobo 137 Posted June 14, 2014 Share Posted June 14, 2014 Effort: 2/2 - I'll give it to you since it's your first in a while Look: 1.75/3 - Blending is an issue here for me since the render stands out to much. The duped render is okay, but it's not the greatest use. I'm not a fan of text on two lines like that, unless the lines were closer together. Stock work also feels a little messy to me, and doesn't really flow together all that well. Creativity: 1/1 - Yep Total: 4.75/6 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/9075-claimedmarcus-hurley/#findComment-83804 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Grumpy Bear 347 Posted June 14, 2014 Share Posted June 14, 2014 (edited) Effort: 2/2 - text, stock work, lighting. I'd say you have enough here being as you're getting back into it. Look: 1.5/3 - The duplicated render, the text and the blending all need work in my opinion and when you get better in those areas you'll go up in the grading points. Creativity: 1/1 - Sure Total: 4.5/6 Final: 5 Edited June 14, 2014 by Bushito Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/9075-claimedmarcus-hurley/#findComment-83884 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ball 453 Posted June 20, 2014 Share Posted June 20, 2014 Claimed Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/9075-claimedmarcus-hurley/#findComment-85384 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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