Hello People I'm Brent Ashe

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I hey my name is Brent Ashe I want to say hey and want to tell what I want to do as a player for you. I want to say that I am a winger that wants to get goals as well as passing the puck if needed. I feel like it is a good thing to tell yall as well that I am a locker room presentence and love to motivate and make my team feel optimistic when things are down. I think that I could be what you need to help your team I'm hungry and want to prove that I'm here to win it all. I feel that it is important to have that fire to win which I have. I want to hopefully convey to everyone who sees this and say that i feel like i can win. I want to be in a environment that can hopefully win a lot of games but also be positive and point me in the right direction. I feel that I can help any team that is a team that is awesome to be around. I feel as if this could help me on my journey to make it the pros. This could also help me gain tpe that I need to upgrade my player to be the best player he can be. I may need a little help but that's alright in the thick of things. I vibe around positivity and to keep in that head space which is very awesome to have. I hope that you feel that same and hope you would like to keep me in the future I feel like I can do the same for my teammates and my coaches. I want them to feel like I can prove that I can be on this team for the long term future and to feel like they don't have to help me. I want to think that I can't get my teammates points as well as be shellfish and score myself sometimes if need be I want to be that catalyst for my team help my player to reach the next level of this weird crazy great amazing journey that I am on. I like to do these tasks because it takes me back to high school and even college how the work is to go into these different and unique tasks that all serve a purpose to help me to where I need to be in my career. I want to provide something to that all teams need to push them to the championship that they need I feel like I could potentiality take them that extra step in the race to contention to whatever cup you have for us here and to hopefully make a statement to say that I was a key guy in that win. I want to say that I won many a award and to say that I can take it to the pros and do it there as well. I want my team to feel that I can lift them on my back if they need it as well as making it a point that I am a top contributor to that team and to make the best of it.

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[jRuutu 2,475]

7.5 /10

 

Hello! I like the enthusiasm and passion for winning. I also like the fact that you want to be part of a team and improve as a player. Good stuff!

 

As potential improvements: I noticed a few grammar errors, and the article could use some spacing to make it slightly easier to read. Now it's just a ''wall'' of text. A picture could be nice, but other than that -  a solid article! Best of luck in your career!

Edited May 7, 2021 by jRuutu