Masu Chan 456 Posted October 9, 2021 Share Posted October 9, 2021 Good evening VHLers. I made another signature, this time for myself wanting to use Cole Cassels as a representation for my character. I'll be honest I had a more difficult time with this one as Cole hasn't really ever played in the NHL and I had to use a photo of him during his time in DEL a couple seasons ago. Only thing I'd really change if I revisit it at a later date is the 'C' on the chest, I struggled getting it right and it was as close I managed to do. Besides that I am happy with how it worked out and think I did an alright job recreating The Reaper's third jersey. diacope and Hogan 2 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/109511-mason-jones-signature-43/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hogan 1,423 Posted October 15, 2021 Share Posted October 15, 2021 Review: One thing that sticks out to me is the numbering on the jersey and the logo crest on the neck. Both are pretty solid and look realistic. I like the way you have the logo wrapping around the jersey, making it look more realistic. You only joined the league a month and a half ago and I really think you have good potential here you can build on easily. Additionally, I really like how you added a few sentences to describe why you chose the render, it's not something you see often but it added a lot for me. 6/10. Overall pretty average but I think with some more graphics and work you could be really good. Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/109511-mason-jones-signature-43/#findComment-879206 Share on other sites More sharing options...
UnknownMinion 728 Posted October 16, 2021 Share Posted October 16, 2021 Review: The City Back ground looks amzing, and the extra text with the team saying(fear the reaper) is Nice and creative, I feel like you could have done something really cool with the font, overall its very nice looking however the line across the jersuy stands out and is eye catching and I think it need to be removed 7/10 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/109511-mason-jones-signature-43/#findComment-879266 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Daniel Janser 2,182 Posted October 16, 2021 Share Posted October 16, 2021 I like the team motto on the sign. A lot of players (me included) but draft year, position, jersey number and/or team they were drafted into, which moves the focus on the player. You decided to put the focus on the team with the city in the background (which I would not have recognized, but hey I am Swiss) and the team motto. Apart from that I only noticed the 'C' which you addressed already on your own accord. 7.5/10 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/109511-mason-jones-signature-43/#findComment-879352 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Larvey 0 Posted October 17, 2021 Share Posted October 17, 2021 Review: The background and smoke effect look really clean, but I feel as if there is empty space between the text and the player, the city background doesn't really fit but it isn't a big issue. The font is also a little off compared to the feel of the image. Overall not bad 7/10 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/109511-mason-jones-signature-43/#findComment-879368 Share on other sites More sharing options...
lemonan 49 Posted October 17, 2021 Share Posted October 17, 2021 Review: I think this graphic is quite well done, but I would have made a few minor adjustments. I really enjoy the smoky background, and think it pairs well with the #Fear the Reaper, which gives off a great vibe. I would have chosen a different photo than the one you chose, as the player does not give off the kind of scariness that I was looking for. However, I think that the font matches very well with the feel of the image and enjoyed looking at it a lot. 7/10 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/109511-mason-jones-signature-43/#findComment-879377 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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