Hendrix Cobberson 31 Posted February 5, 2022 Share Posted February 5, 2022 Matt thunder 1 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/116065-cobberson-brothers-david-and-me/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
mattyIceman 1,229 Posted February 5, 2022 Share Posted February 5, 2022 Review time: Hey man, long time no chat. Another Cobberson eh? Are they twins or what? Good idea to have second renders shadowing the ones in front, but if they were black and white, they wouldn't detract from the main ones. Add something for the background, plain white is misleading; that would help bring everything together. Not crazy about the font or text; you could add a "the" at the beginning. The effect on the font is a nice touch though. The black dot effect would have been cooler with a background, but at least you can tell where the borders are because of it. You got some room for improvement and I have no doubt you will! 5/10 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/116065-cobberson-brothers-david-and-me/#findComment-908694 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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