Caillean 504 Posted September 8, 2014 Share Posted September 8, 2014 (edited) Edited September 8, 2014 by Caillean122 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/12064-claimedjaime-new/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
Commissioner Beketov 9,025 Posted September 8, 2014 Commissioner Share Posted September 8, 2014 Effort: 2/2 - I can see that you’re trying Look: 1.5/3 - Unfortunately there is a lot that isn’t really working here. The lighting is effecting the render which is good (and often a rookie mistake) but the dot itself seems out of place. The render, while lit, isn’t blended in the slightest and is fighting for focal control with the text which is shoved way off in the corner and has way too many cheesy effects applied. As a rule of thumb place the text closer to the render to try the eye to where you want, rather than pushing it off to the side, and use stock work rather than text effects to make it pop. Creativity: 1/1 - I don’t see a problem here, you’re getting started I can tell but you’re going places. Total: 4.5/6 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/12064-claimedjaime-new/#findComment-118202 Share on other sites More sharing options...
sherifflobo 137 Posted September 9, 2014 Share Posted September 9, 2014 Effort: 2/2 - Yep Look: 1.75/3 - I can definitely see that you're trying and that you just need to keep practicing. Beketov got everything I was going to say, so just keep working, you're sure to get better. Creativity: 1/1 - Yes Total: 4.75/6 FINAL: 5/6 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/12064-claimedjaime-new/#findComment-118657 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ball 453 Posted September 17, 2014 Share Posted September 17, 2014 Claimed Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/12064-claimedjaime-new/#findComment-121273 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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