Caillean 504 Posted September 25, 2014 Share Posted September 25, 2014 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/12514-claimednew-pt/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
Commissioner Beketov 9,103 Posted September 26, 2014 Commissioner Share Posted September 26, 2014 Effort: 2/2 - I can see enough effort here.Look: 2.25/3 - The colouring work suits the piece well but that’s the main piece of good I can give this. The lighting is all over the place (too bright in the middle,, too dark at the edges) and the text has major issues. The font choice is bad, it doesn’t blend at all, it’s too far from the render, etc. It does appear like you’re still new to this so keep trying new things but this does need some work. Creativity: 1/1 - Yup. Total: 5.25/6 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/12514-claimednew-pt/#findComment-127155 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Grumpy Bear 347 Posted September 26, 2014 Share Posted September 26, 2014 Effort: 2/2 - Lighting, render, text, stock work, you have enough. Look: 2.25/3 - The lighting could use work, the render is pretty low quality but you do have the blending which isn`t my favorite with the smudge but hey you did it at least. Creativity: 1/1 - I’ll give you this. Total: 5.25/6 Final: 5 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/12514-claimednew-pt/#findComment-127199 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted October 1, 2014 Share Posted October 1, 2014 Claimed Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/12514-claimednew-pt/#findComment-130127 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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