Harumpf 313 Posted September 26, 2014 Share Posted September 26, 2014 Just learning how to do graphics. Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/12557-harumpf-1st-sig/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
Commissioner Beketov 9,107 Posted September 26, 2014 Commissioner Share Posted September 26, 2014 Effort: 2/2 - Yeah. Look: 2.25/3 - You’re new, as you said, so I’ll try and give you some good advice here, this does need some help though. The BG is actually pretty, nice use of stocks and it goes well with the burnt film look on the edges. Not sure what’s going on with the starburst though, it seems like it should add lighting but it doesn’t. Get some curves adjustments in there to bring the light in. The main issue I have though is the text. It stands out way too much and is distracting from the render which is supposed to be the main focus. Bring it in closer to the render and use stocks to blend it rather than having it be such a bright blue. Creativity: 1/1 - I’ll give you this. Total: 5.25/6 Harumpf 1 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/12557-harumpf-1st-sig/#findComment-127180 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Grumpy Bear 347 Posted September 26, 2014 Share Posted September 26, 2014 Effort: 2/2 - Stock work, render/effects, text, you did enough for this. Look: 2.5/3 - Really all you need is better text and a good lighting source, this is light years ahead of where I was when I started. Creativity: 1/1 - Yeah Total: 5.5/6 Final: 5 Harumpf 1 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/12557-harumpf-1st-sig/#findComment-127214 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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