kikish18 108 Posted September 28, 2014 Share Posted September 28, 2014 Can I create one to VHLM too? Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/12639-this-gonna-be-disaster-or-something-cool/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
sherifflobo 137 Posted September 28, 2014 Share Posted September 28, 2014 Effort: 2/2 - I'll give it to you. Look: 1.5/3 - I think the renders are a bit too small, and the glows around them don't work. I would make the renders a bit bigger, and place them closer to the logo. The background feels a bit messy to me, and banners, at least imo work better with something a bit more simple. You always want to be able to pull colours from your render and use them in your graphics, so the yellow on the Chara render doesn't really work with this particular background. Just keep working on the basics, and you'll get better. Creativity: 1/1 - Yes Total: 4.5/6 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/12639-this-gonna-be-disaster-or-something-cool/#findComment-128700 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Grumpy Bear 347 Posted September 30, 2014 Share Posted September 30, 2014 Effort: 2/2 - Blending, lighting, logo, coloring, stock work, jersey changes, you definitely have it. Look: 1.5/3 - I think the chara render sticks out like a sore thumb here being the only thing yellow. I also think the glow around the renders doesn't fit the banner very well and is distracting. I applaud the jersey changes however. Keep at it. Creativity: 1/1 - Yeah Total: 4.5/6 Final: 5 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/12639-this-gonna-be-disaster-or-something-cool/#findComment-129375 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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