Claimed:Nik Kurri

[nikkurri17 109]

[Mr. Grumpy Bear 347]

Effort: 1.5/2 - It's really just a background, logo, render and text unless you cut the render as well. I know you just started and are working with the GIMP so I'll go easy on you.

 

Look: 1.5/3 - We need to get you working on Blending/stock work and lighting. I will go over some stuff in the locker room with you after I get GIMP and find out how to use it. Overall you want your render at the 1/3rd mark in the sig where you're more over in the corner. The text should slightly overlap the render so as to keep a solid focal point where as now you hve a triangle between the render, the text and the logo which makes your eyes dart everywhere. That's all for now, Like I said I will get some stuff up in the locker room for you.

 

Creativity: 1/1 - Yeah, just starting out, it's all creative.

 

Total: 4/6

[nikkurri17 109]

actually I don't even know how to use gimp lol

 

this is work I did on a photo editing website.

 

Appreciate the tips though, there's a lot I can take from that one paragraph to improve my work.

Edited November 16, 2014 by nikkurri17

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Effort: 1.5/2 - I'm with bushito in the fact of that this looks like minimal work.

 

Look: 1.5/3 - Since you use a photo editor, that should tell you why it isn't the best. I like the fact of that you put him on the ice though.

 

Creativity: 1/1 - I'll give you it.

 

Total: 4/6

 

FINAL 4

[James 77]

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