NUCK 151 Posted September 23, 2015 Share Posted September 23, 2015 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/24210-claimednuck-final-56/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
Paramorise 255 Posted September 24, 2015 Share Posted September 24, 2015 Effort: 2/2 - Yeah Look: 2.5/3 - I actually really like the background, but the lighting on the at the middle a bit ruins it for me. At first I didn't even see, that there's that other dude who is getting hit. Text could use some work and lighting could be a bit better on the renders. Creativity: 1/1 - Sure Grade : 5.5 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/24210-claimednuck-final-56/#findComment-272834 Share on other sites More sharing options...
STLZACH 29 Posted September 29, 2015 Share Posted September 29, 2015 Effort: 2/2 - Seems like. Look: 2/3 - The lighting in this is VERY strong (overpowering) and its a little washed out. I don't hate the brush work as effects, but I think you should erase the layer of black brushing or the layer of burning (whichever it is that you used for the darkness on the edges.) Also, when you did the lighting on your render, I think you should have turned the opacity of your brush down. The text is what really kills this though. I don't like the font choice, the effects, or the stroke, or the opacity. It looks like wordart. Creativity: 1/1 - Sure 5/6 --> 5/6 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/24210-claimednuck-final-56/#findComment-274203 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kendrick 4,741 Posted October 5, 2015 Share Posted October 5, 2015 Claimed Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/24210-claimednuck-final-56/#findComment-275279 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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