JumpierPegasus 52 Posted December 23, 2013 Share Posted December 23, 2013 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/3146-im-back/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted December 23, 2013 Share Posted December 23, 2013 Scrub <3 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/3146-im-back/#findComment-20442 Share on other sites More sharing options...
sherifflobo 137 Posted December 26, 2013 Share Posted December 26, 2013 (edited) Graded next week as it is free doubles week. Edited December 26, 2013 by sherifflobo Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/3146-im-back/#findComment-21619 Share on other sites More sharing options...
sherifflobo 137 Posted December 30, 2013 Share Posted December 30, 2013 Effort: 2/2 - Yes, enough here. Look: 2.5/3 - Text is a big issue here for me. It stands out far too much and doesn't really flow with the sig too well. That clipping mask on it is absolutely killing it for me. A general rule of thumb is to not put the text on the top layer. The lighting is okay, but I'm not a huge fan of it. Creativity: 1/1 - Yep Total: 5.5/6 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/3146-im-back/#findComment-23120 Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack 498 Posted January 2, 2014 Share Posted January 2, 2014 Effort: 2/2 - yep, good job Look: 2.5/3 - some good elements here. render should usually stand out a bit more. I'd have to disagree with lobo about the text rule of thumb. It's not often that text isn't on top of the player. But the principle remains, the render is supposed to be the main focal point. Creativity: 1/1 - very nice Final: 6/6 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/3146-im-back/#findComment-24328 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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