.cLassic 6 Posted March 29, 2014 Share Posted March 29, 2014 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/6623-claimedhartleyv2/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
sherifflobo 137 Posted March 31, 2014 Share Posted March 31, 2014 Effort: 2/2 - Yep, just enough here to give you full marks. Look: 2/3 - I'm not sure if you did the cut yourself, but good job if you did. I have quite a few issues with this, and I'll start with the render. It's a little too bright, and stands out in comparison to the background. I applaud you for trying some distortion in the background, but I don't think it works to well here. I would try to erase some of the duped render to make the distortion effect a little bit better. I like the text work on this and you did a good job with the clipping mask. I would also blur the background to add some depth to it. Try to play with stocks on top of the render to make the render blend a bit. Creativity: 1/1 - Yep. Total: 5/6 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/6623-claimedhartleyv2/#findComment-58755 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sandro 251 Posted March 31, 2014 Share Posted March 31, 2014 Effort: 2/2 - Sure Look: 2/3 - Sherriff already wrote a paragraph saying pretty much everything else, so yeah: too bright + not a fan of the duped render + background displacement doesn't quite work + text is solid but a little difficult to read + there's an overall lack of depth. Creativity: 1/1 Overall: 5/6 ➨ FINAL GRADE: 5/6 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/6623-claimedhartleyv2/#findComment-58920 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted April 8, 2014 Share Posted April 8, 2014 Claimed Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/6623-claimedhartleyv2/#findComment-61281 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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