Speed 126 Posted April 6, 2020 Share Posted April 6, 2020 gorlab 1 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/80307-seabass-perrin/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pengu 87 Posted April 6, 2020 Share Posted April 6, 2020 I like how much more you did with this one than your current. The concept is there but the composition is a little off. Text should be more readable, and it's hard to find a focal point because the text and the brand are both the same size. But I do like the smoke, and colouring with the lighting. Try adding texture in your backgrounds! 6/10 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/80307-seabass-perrin/#findComment-729564 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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