FBR 158 Posted June 12, 2014 Share Posted June 12, 2014 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/9057-claimedfuture-1st-overall-not/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
sherifflobo 137 Posted June 14, 2014 Share Posted June 14, 2014 Effort: 2/2 - sure Look: 2.5/3 - There are a couple things here that just don't work. First, the white text draws focus away from the render and stands out too much. Secondly, the left side is a bit too empty and a bit dark for my liking. I think the blending is pretty good, but the text takes away from the good work you did with blending. Stock work is decent too. Creativity: 1/1 - Yep Total: 5.5/6 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/9057-claimedfuture-1st-overall-not/#findComment-83795 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Grumpy Bear 347 Posted June 14, 2014 Share Posted June 14, 2014 Effort: 2/2 - Coloring, text, stock work, effects, lighting. I'd say you have enough here. Look: 2.5/3 - Sherriff caught the main thing which is the text stealing the focal point from the render. Could have made the render bigger to compensate. The blending, lighting and such all look great. Creativity: 1/1 - Sure Total: 5.5/6 Final: 6 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/9057-claimedfuture-1st-overall-not/#findComment-83883 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted July 1, 2014 Share Posted July 1, 2014 Claimed Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/9057-claimedfuture-1st-overall-not/#findComment-88022 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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