MIP Candidate

[ThePerfectNut 563]

[Sljppers 23]

The render on the player is real blurry, but the logo placement and distortion is good. The background is fine as a stock picture frame, I suppose, but the post effects, what are they? Skid marks? Ice? Snow? Artifacts? Dirt? I really can't tell, but it's visually interesting nonetheless. I like the ideas presented but the text work is just.. Baffling. What is going on here? Like I'm not trying to step on your artistic stylings but I just really have no firm grasp on what effect you were trying to achieve by splitting the text in teal and white. I understand you rightly assumed the text needs attention to pop or be eye catching but the methods do so in the wrong way. And what exactly is going on with the logo in the top right? Cool idea, though. And I'm not trying to be needlessly critical, I don't know what medium you're using but you can rasterize text and apply all sorts of layer effects to it to make it pop without making it confusing in most photo editors. Like I use pixlr.com. It's free and web based. Hope this helps some.  5.5/10