assassin6898 81 Posted March 18, 2021 Share Posted March 18, 2021 (edited) https://docs.google.com/document/d/1izmumXhPMp1-ilUi5oExXRzGEmgbm915TZOG0fqbDOY/edit this is my orignal article for the vht edition this week it was edited to be shorter so this is the original Edited March 18, 2021 by assassin6898 diacope 1 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/101036-claiming-my-article-from-vht-507-words-originally/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
diacope 1,696 Posted March 18, 2021 Share Posted March 18, 2021 I like this a lot. You told us what the article was about with a good introduction, had a few quotes from members of the league to bring it together more and you explained what's next as well as how much you like the idea to wrap up the article. Has a newspaper look and the text matches perfectly specially with the font. It was hard to find any faults but if I could make a suggestion for next time.. Better title font to fit with the rest of the text and draw the reader in (if it was a page in the paper) and you could also add the league logo above that? 9/10 GORLAB THE GOAT Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/101036-claiming-my-article-from-vht-507-words-originally/#findComment-833523 Share on other sites More sharing options...
assassin6898 81 Posted March 18, 2021 Author Share Posted March 18, 2021 (edited) 4 minutes ago, 16z said: I like this a lot. You told us what the article was about with a good introduction, had a few quotes from members of the league to bring it together more and you explained what's next as well as how much you like the idea to wrap up the article. Has a newspaper look and the text matches perfectly specially with the font. It was hard to find any faults but if I could make a suggestion for next time.. Better title font to fit with the rest of the text and draw the reader in (if it was a page in the paper) and you could also add the league logo above that? 9/10 GORLAB THE GOAT ill take that under considertation as this was for the vht at this moment if you want to see the better version of it please check out the vht edition 4 as it maybe hard to read but you can click on the articles and zoom in on them @16z Edited March 18, 2021 by assassin6898 diacope 1 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/101036-claiming-my-article-from-vht-507-words-originally/#findComment-833525 Share on other sites More sharing options...
diacope 1,696 Posted March 18, 2021 Share Posted March 18, 2021 6 minutes ago, assassin6898 said: ill take that under considertation as this was for the vht at this moment if you want to see the better version of it please check out the vht edition 4 as it maybe hard to read but you can click on the articles and zoom in on them @16z VHT? Nah I'm on a computer so it loaded fine. If you made another episode of this on here, add it to the post! I'll definitely take a look Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/101036-claiming-my-article-from-vht-507-words-originally/#findComment-833531 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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