Matt thunder 444 Posted April 16, 2021 Share Posted April 16, 2021 (edited) Hey it's me, matt, and as my player really sucks, I'm writing this to get some tpe to upgrade him, even if we all know that he will continue to play very bad as usual. but that's enough talking about how my player is trash, we need to talk about an alternate story about my player, matt thunder. So, what would happen if matt Thunder wasn't drafted by riga in the S74 draft? Let's suppose that if Riga didn't draft me, no other team would have drafted me, as it's hard to think where I would have ended, also because I have zero immagination. (but let's not say that) Today is also your lucky day as I don't have one alternate story but guess what, two! (i know, you are really hyped for this like I am) Let's start by the first one: The first one is really short but still deserve attention. After not beeing drafted at the S74 draft Matt played his last season with Las Vegas, but when that season ended, Matt did not gave up with hockey (as it was the only thing that he was good at) and he decided to become the trainer for the defenders of the (only ) team that drafted him, the las Vegas aces. His life would have continued like this living in Vegas with his wife, his two kids and also teaching the new talents of his team how to become great and maybe, maybe, see them drafted by a team of the vhl. (as he would always make him proud seeing some talents trained by him finally reaching the vhl, an objective that he never reached) The second one is a lot more different and also more longer: After not beeing drafted by any team in the vhl, matt gave up with hockey, and went back to his life in his home town, pont-aven (a small city in France, where matt was born and he grew up) and once he came back, he became depressed, thinking that maybe they didn't draft him because he was a failure or things like that. After he passed some mouths depressed, he finally understood that maybe his life wasn't that bad after all, and he started to work in the comic store that his father owned and where he worked, trying to forget his past with the sport he always loved, hockey. And that was his life, a normal one,living with (like in the frist story) his wife and his two kids at Pont-aven still working in the comic store, but sometimes it happened that he would think about how is life would have been if he was drafted, maybe also becoming a captain of a vhl team and making new friends, but after all, they were all just some stupid thoughts, that would never happen, maybe in a parallel universe if he was lucky, even if they don't really exist. So this is it, I hope you liked my two stories (and the ending of the second story as I put a lot of effort into it) even if they aren't that interesting, I hope you will have a good weekend, we will meet again in my next media spot. 545 words if i'm not wrong. Edited April 16, 2021 by Matt thunder Hoopydog 1 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/102092-what-if-matt-thunder/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hoopydog 195 Posted April 17, 2021 Share Posted April 17, 2021 Nice job on this media spot mate, I like your approach to this we're Matt Thunder wasn't drafted and you put in some good effort to come up with scenarios where that was the case. The piece is split up well and easy to read. Next time, maybe add some headings or bolden some of the text at the start of the scenarios to make is that bit more easy to read. Overall nice job. 9/10 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/102092-what-if-matt-thunder/#findComment-840263 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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