Lilith Tours Halifax

[Lilith_Lunar 131]

Since Lilith Lunar has been taken in by the Halifax 21st team in the VHLM, she has decided to take a walk around the city to see the sights. First of all, she visited the black market store where she saw many handmade pots, furniture, and decor. It was a very unique shop indeed and she appreciated the style of the items on sale. Whilst they didn't fit her usual aesthetic, she decided to pick up some coasters that she could send back home to her friends, as souvenirs from her new city.

After looking around this peculiar little store she took a walk alongside the waterfront, where she spotted an ice cream stall called Beaver Tails. The beverages served at this place looked rather refreshing and she grabbed herself a chocolate milkshake, to take with her on her walk. It was nice, sweet, and cool, just perfect to walk by the water with. She saw many boats sat on the water in Halifax, she had the urge to shout 'BOAT GANG' as she saw them. She learned that the phrase was a tradition of her teammates, who would yell the phrase every time they were on the ice, every time they greeted each other, and basically all of the time. Since she didn't want to frighten the locals she suppressed the desire to scream and continued on her way.

Next Lilith decided to take a browse around the shopping center, window shopping can be very fun. There was a lush bath bomb store in the mall and the strong perfumed smells of the cleaning products filled Lilith's nostrils, creating a scented map for her to follow straight to the shop. Once there Lilith thought about which bath bomb she could buy for her ex-teammate, Ashton. He was a fan of dessert smells rather than floral ones. Or she could get him a black bath bomb that reflected his dark emo soul. She decided to get one of each, her friend won't be getting just one bath after all. That would be very gross.

Once Lilith had purchased her items from Lush, she moved on to the terrace food court to pick up some lunch. There were many different styles of food to choose from but in the end, she decided to eat a salad since she had just had a milkshake, she didn't want to eat too unhealthily if she was going to succeed in her athletic career. She made sure to have egg and beef on her salad for protein, however.  The salad was very yum, but the fast-paced beat of the music playing overhead made her eat a little quicker than she had expected to, so she was finished and out of the eating area within 15 minutes.

After her tour of Halifax, Lilith headed back to her team's locker room to get ready for the evening's match, she kept all of the gifts that she had bought for that day inside her locker, which made her clothing smell very perfumed due to the bath bomb.

[Beketov 9,029]

Didn’t take in pier 21? It is the namesake of the team after all.

[ROOKIE745 604]

Review: Very good media spot, I love your choice of words, makes it more fun to read. I like that we get to see a smidge of her personality in here and her curiosity of the city she now plays in. I enjoyed reading the section of her buying a bath bomb for her former teammate. The only two improvements I could suggest would be a picture of Halixfax itself and spacing out the paragraphs more, stops it from being a wall of text, otherwise really good! 9/10