Kisslinger II season overview.

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Kisslinger II regular season.

 Kisslinger II had an amazing rookie season in the VHLM season this season with 50 goals and 89 assists for 139 points in 72 games. Kisslinger II lead the league in assists this season which is quite crazy because in the middle of the season he was 10 assists behind first place.  Kisslinger II had lots and lots of ice time in Halifax as he was a first line forward and captain of the team. Halifax as a team struggled and could never really take off due to lack of defensemen in the regular season.  Kisslinger II came out of the dispersal draft with a plan to show all the other teams that let him fall to the 3rd round that he was the pick of the draft. Kisslinger II felt like he just proved that with this past season. Kisslinger II put up close to 500 shots this season and put 50 of them in the net. The shot percentage is not the best, but the good thing is he puts pucks on the net as well as being an elite level passer. Kisslinger II had a 33 plus minus during the regular season which shows that he is on the ice when the puck goes into the opposing teams net not his own. Kisslinger II has all the skills to become a VHL great and he is looking to prove that soon, Kisslinger II will keep grinding, keep earning that TPE and really help whatever team decides to call his name come draft night. In Kisslinger II VHLM career, in 85 games played he put up 52 goals and 89 assists for 141 points. Kisslinger II I feel is one of the most underrated players because of this stacked draft class with all these big-name members of the community. Yes, Kisslinger II may not earn as much TPE as them but look at the stats for this season and look where he is on the leaderboards compared to others, it really makes a case for his playing ability.

 

Kisslinger II playoff performance.

 

Kisslinger II and the Halifax 21st went up against the Saskatoon wild in round one of the VHLM playoffs. Saskatoon is a deep team and the 21st knew they had a fight ahead. Kisslinger II put up 7 points in 5 games this play off series as the Wild would beat the 21st in 5 games. Kisslinger II has never really got the chance to prove if he is a play off performer or not yet as he has never had a deep run. Kisslinger II has put up in total 3 goals and 7 assists for 10 points in 16 games played. I feel like Kisslinger II will be a solid play off performer if given the chance to be. Kisslinger II is hoping that his inexperience in the playoffs is not a problem with his draft stock and is hoping a team in the first round will take a chance on him and let him prove to be the steal of the draft, just like he was in the vhlm. 

 

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REVIEW

 

I liked that you went beyond simply listing stats and recapping how your player did - you added those much needed pieces of narrative to the article, with the mentions of being underrated and looking to prove people wrong. I hope your player does that!

Your sentences tend to run on a bit though. What I mean is some of the sentences in your article could probably be cut up into 2 or 3 seperate ones to make it flow more smoothly and read better.  And we'll, despite adding those narrative fragments most of the article was just listing stats, which while understandable in a recap article just doesn't really read well. 

Overall good, keep up the grind!

6.5/10