Jorgen Von Strangle drafted to the Halifax 21st

[Timmy Turner 18]

[Vice 292]

This looks awesome. This kind of reminds me of a graphic that a social media account for a team would put out after drafting someone. Informative, eye-catching and conveys a lot of information.

 

If I were to add anything, your render looks like it could benefit from some motion blur. I would try taking the render itself, duplicate it, then blur that behind the original render just to add some action to the overall graphic. I would also explore replacing the white text boxes with either a white outline of the text or a nice drop shadow.

I love the logo right where it is and the choice in your background was also perfect. The Halifax logo looks well-oriented, some noise to blend it better with the jersey could help.

 

8.5/10! I look forward to seeing more.

 

Edited September 21, 2021 by Vice
Forgot to change to my color.