Isau Considers Retirement

[Eynhallow 412]

[Vice 408]

8 hours ago, Eynhallow said:

 

HAHA! The confused guy is actually a hilarious render. Something about the missing tooth and goofy-ass stance. Overall, this a good start and I could see this as a banner or graphic to accompany a news article (maybe write an article on this and include it for TPE!) That said, this is a great foundation with areas to improve. Some advice that I got on the Discord was to make sure the render doesn't abruptly end or get cut off. So in the case here, maybe bringing the canvas in or making your renders a bit bigger so that he's just not cut-off at the hip. I love the effect you did on the text, but add a drop shadow or just a solid color of the same text underneath so it's more legible. The Question Mark is a nice little touch and you blended it in well. Perhaps once the render is moved a bit, you could find a way to incorporate it into the effects!

Very good start and I look forward to seeing more from you @Eynhallow, 6/10!