OrbitingDeath 3,183 Posted October 10, 2021 Share Posted October 10, 2021 (edited) @IslesWinhope you like it point task for week ending october 24 - due to theme week Edited October 12, 2021 by OrbitingDeath IslesWin, JB123 and diacope 2 1 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/109550-lerner/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
Daniel Janser 2,169 Posted October 10, 2021 Share Posted October 10, 2021 Overall really nice graphic. Just a few points to consider (and that is high level 'complaining'), the Islanders logo on the helmet is still recognizable... if it is too trick to replace with the respective team logo, I recommend to 'overpaint' it. The number on the back looks odd (but maybe that is only my perception and I could not achieve the level of 'crumpledness' you did). I like the font of the name and if you used a different colour for the font than the lightning it would be perfect (I had to second guess the name). Of course if you wanted to keep the amount of hues limited this is fine as well. 9/10 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/109550-lerner/#findComment-878163 Share on other sites More sharing options...
ke1vi 662 Posted October 10, 2021 Share Posted October 10, 2021 Pretty decent graphic. You have a great background, a nice font for the text and a filter applied to the render. Everything is laid out nicely, especially with how you have the text behind the render for depth. You want to add some lighting to this to give it some more depth and help bring everything together. Specifically on top of the render and the text to make them the focal point of the sig. 8/10 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/109550-lerner/#findComment-878240 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moon 591 Posted October 11, 2021 Share Posted October 11, 2021 Review: I really like this graphic! The painted look makes it look so good in my opinion. I don't think there is much you could change about this graphic besides maybe making the name not as covered by the hands on the render. Overall i'd have to give this a 8/10. Like i said its only the name that is the only thing i think you could change, Good Work! Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/109550-lerner/#findComment-878439 Share on other sites More sharing options...
OrbitingDeath 3,183 Posted October 11, 2021 Author Share Posted October 11, 2021 16 hours ago, Daniel Janser said: the Islanders logo on the helmet is still recognizable. Actually intended, the guy's an islanders fan and will still have to be drafted to a team here, so wanted to make something he could keep on using Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/109550-lerner/#findComment-878525 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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