Instanbul 1st Line

[Hogan 1,423]

 

Edited January 1, 2022 by FonziGG

[Steve 1,920]

Review:

I like the concept and you did a fine job with the placement of your renders. The color palette fills the whole spectrum, I like what you were going for with your choices. The particle/star background looks good but it needs a bit of texture as it works best as an overlay than the main layer. Overall you did some good stuff here. With some different blending and maybe some detail work it could be even better. Keep up the great work.

8/10

[mattyIceman 1,213]

Review time.

 

Renders are pretty cool and color matched, and they're well placed.  I just don't like the color selection.  It's too distracting and they take up alot of room in front of the players.  On a further note, they don't match the background.  There's nothing congruent here, there isn't any flow.  You get points for showing a logo swap on the guy in the front.  Perhaps some neutral color like grey would have pulled everything together instead of the low-opacity smoke effect in front.  Not a fan of the font choice either but the placement is fine.

 

5/10