Claimed:The Origin of Niklaus Mikaelson

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Name: Niklaus Mikaelson

Position: Goalie

Current Team: VHLM

Number: 29

Age: 18

Height: 6'4"

Weight: 215 Lbs.

Birthplace: New Orleans, Louisiana, USA

 

Childhood:

 

 

Niklaus Mikaelson was born some time during the 10th century. Niklaus never met his father as his father was of the werewolf decent. His mother, Esther is a very powerful witch. With the birth of Klaus, he was actually a secret as Esther was with Mikael who is the father of his four siblings. He has 3 brothers, Kol, Finn and Elijah. Finn is the oldest, Elijah was second, Klaus and then Kol. They also all have a sister named Rebekah. Rebekah is the youngest of the children. Mikael is one of the original vampires, (the oldest are not named in here). Esther is the one who turned all of her children into vampires to save their lives. The werewolves were trying to take over their village and she feared for her children's lives. So she thought the only way necessary was to turn them into immortal creatures. The were taught that they had to feed on human blood in order to not die. They had to transform fully into vampires. Of course the fact that Mikael knew that Klaus was born of a different father made him always hate him. He shunned him and basically made him an outcast in the family. Mikael was always tougher on Klaus as he hated that he was born of werewolf.

 

High School:

 

Klaus never really got the chance to go to high school like a normal person. Being turned into a vampire when he was just a teenager and also having to run from his village did that. He found time to study whenever he could without anyone knowing. Of course he had to learn a lot of the stuff on his own, but he also traveled the world a lot. So he picked up knowledge everywhere he went. Also he had a chance to witness a lot of historical events happen as he never died. He managed to learn a lot of things when he was traveling through talking with people and some of the friends that he had made over the years.

 

College:

 

College wasn't an issue for Klaus. By the time he first decided to go to college, he had learned a lot of stuff. Also being a vampire allowed him to use mind control on anyone he wanted. So he figured he would use his mind control on his teachers and he made them give him straight A's in all of his classes. He didn't go in with s specific major but he did graduate. He decided that he was going to go to college again. He had to wait of course another 20-30 years before that happened so people wouldn't be so suspicious of him looking like he was in his twenties still. He decided to go to a different college in a different state and it was there he learned to play soccer. He played for the school's team and he picked it up real well. He lead the team to 4 straight championship seasons. Another 100 years passed before he wanted to go back to college for a third time. This time he learned of what baseball was. Of course that's not what it was called as they just hit a ball with a stick. The college have a team for that but he found out what the game was about.

 

Current Years:

 

 

After going to college 5 times in his life, Klaus eventually just moved on. He decided that New Orleans was going to be his new home. Klaus, Rebekah and Elijah all settled down in New Orleans. Over the years they have talked with each other and have traveled different places but New Orleans will always be their home. Klaus killed off the owner of this really awesome looking mansion and he became the owner of it. Him and his two siblings have been living there for the course of a century. They have lived through many events and have done many of things and some are not mentioned. Right now there are multiple vampires living in New Orleans, but Klaus is still the head honcho. He is the one who calls the shots. There have been many fight within the vampire community, but nothing really major. Klaus had discovered hockey one day when the television was on. So he decided he wanted a first hand look at what it was like. He decided he was going to travel around the United States to go watch some games. Of course he couldn't help but drain some of the fans blood. But he managed to pick up the game and decided he wanted to give it a try.

 

 

Pros:

 

 

1. Hand Speed - Klaus has the fastest hands in his draft class. He might have the fastest hands that you have seen in quite a few years. Being a vampire, his reflexes are very heightened and he can move very quickly. He prides himself on his hand speed and it is one of his top assets to his game.

 

2. Intelligent - His intelligence is unmatched. He has seen a lot of things over the years and he is very smart. He has watched enough games to really keep up. His ability to take in things and be able to retain everything that has gone on is beyond measure. He knows where the puck is going and he gets to it to deflect it from going into his net.

 

3. Humble - Klaus is one of the most humble guys you will ever meet. He knows that he can be quite vicious, but when it comes to his teammates and his coach, he has to be nice. Of course he has to in general because he doesn't want suspicions to occur of him being a vampire. No one has figured it out yet and he wants it to remain that way.

 

 

Cons:

 

 

1. Agility - He may be fast, but he isn't as agile as he could be. Of course agility makes a huge difference to goalies as it helps when blocking the puck. It has resulted in quite a few number of goals that he has let up during some games he has played. He has to improve this fast if he wants to be come one of the best of all time.

 

2. Skating - This is a huge downfall for him. He isn't exactly the most coordinated person when he puts on the skates. Some of the goals, he has caught himself tripping over himself as he tried to block the shots. It has been one of the other reasons why he has let up a decent amount of goals in his career.

 

3. Leadership - This is one of the qualities that he lacks. He can manage to be the alpha dog when it comes to being a vampire, but when it comes to hockey, he is clueless. He has to get a better understanding of the game and has to let his voice be heard. If he can start speaking up in the locker room, maybe he can help the team make a difference.

[Will 4,660]

Content: 3/3

Nice job. Although Klaus has a very strange background, I'm confident he will turn into a great goalie. 

 

Grammar: 2/2

Not really anything worth mentioning here, impressive.

 

Appearance: 1/1

Full marks for including Anna Paquin. 

 

Pros: 2/2

Look good to me.

 

Cons: 2/2

Also looking good to me.

 

Overall: 10/10

Edited September 7, 2014 by Draper

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