Wasty 566 Posted September 8, 2014 Share Posted September 8, 2014 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/12069-claimedgilbert-allaire/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
Commissioner Beketov 9,103 Posted September 8, 2014 Commissioner Share Posted September 8, 2014 Effort: 2/2 - I can see you trying some things here. Light sigs are especially tricky sometimes. Look: 2.25/3 - I want to like this because I love light pieces but something just doesn’t feel right. I feel like a large portion of the problem is the lighting. Every bit of light is focussed on the render’s back which makes his face dull and washed out. The flow of my eyes is th render’s back, the text, and then finally his face which is the opposite order that you want to achieve. The BG work is simple but solid and I like what you were going for with the thin text, although the font choice could have been better. Ultimately that red splotch is majorly holding this sig back. Creativity: 1/1 - I see no issue giving the creativity points. Total: 5.25/6 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/12069-claimedgilbert-allaire/#findComment-118209 Share on other sites More sharing options...
sherifflobo 137 Posted September 9, 2014 Share Posted September 9, 2014 Effort: 2/2 - Yep Look: 2.25/3 - Yeah Beketov nailed it with the lighting. It should really be more over the face or entire render, not the back. I can see what you were going for and I think it could have been really cool with just some tweeks and better lighting. Creativity: 1/1 - Yep Total: 5.25/6 FINAL: 5/6 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/12069-claimedgilbert-allaire/#findComment-118661 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frank 5,259 Posted September 17, 2014 Share Posted September 17, 2014 Claimed Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/12069-claimedgilbert-allaire/#findComment-121367 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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