Samurai7 102 Posted September 9, 2014 Share Posted September 9, 2014 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/12088-claimedslaughtered/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
Commissioner Beketov 9,025 Posted September 9, 2014 Commissioner Share Posted September 9, 2014 Effort: 2/2 - I can see some effort put in here. Look: 2.5/3 - The pieces are there for this to be a great sig but it doesn't feel quite complete. The entire sig is a little washed out with the exception of the text. This is a major issue as it makes the text the focus point over everything else. The render almost feels like a BG aspect compared to the text which is not something you ever want. with some contrast lighting and some stock work on the text I think this could be a much stronger piece. With all that said, I'm not docking a lot. All the pieces are there, they just need a little extra work so it's not as bad as it all seems. Creativity: 1/1 - I can see some creativity so I'll give you this point. Total: 5.5/6 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/12088-claimedslaughtered/#findComment-118642 Share on other sites More sharing options...
sherifflobo 137 Posted September 9, 2014 Share Posted September 9, 2014 Effort: 2/2 - Yep Look: 2.5/3 - The whole sig is washed out and it feels a bit dark, which in turn makes it feel flat. The lighting is definitely a big cause of this, and it really could have helped you out here. Text is the focal, so that's another big problem for me. Nice JC and blending is okay. Creativity: 1/1 - Yes Total: 5.5/6 FINAL: 6/6 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/12088-claimedslaughtered/#findComment-118669 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kesler 1,514 Posted September 16, 2014 Share Posted September 16, 2014 Claimed Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/12088-claimedslaughtered/#findComment-120990 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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