leandrofg 1,156 Posted June 27, 2022 Share Posted June 27, 2022 It took a while longer than you'd expect, but here it is @Matt thunder! Matt thunder and Brandon 1 1 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/123220-the-berlin-wall-basileus-jute/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
Daniel Janser 2,169 Posted June 27, 2022 Share Posted June 27, 2022 Haselhoff is missing in the background leandrofg 1 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/123220-the-berlin-wall-basileus-jute/#findComment-934048 Share on other sites More sharing options...
leandrofg 1,156 Posted June 27, 2022 Author Share Posted June 27, 2022 2 hours ago, Daniel Janser said: Haselhoff is missing in the background On the next one! But that would be pretty awesome Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/123220-the-berlin-wall-basileus-jute/#findComment-934118 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Matt thunder 444 Posted June 27, 2022 Share Posted June 27, 2022 Wow, this is great, I just love it, everything is perfect, the logo swap is really good and also the change of the color of the jersey is done really well, and the background, oh my god, it is the Berlin wall, wow just incredible. This gets a solid 9 out of a 10. Thank you again for this incredible graphic. leandrofg 1 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/123220-the-berlin-wall-basileus-jute/#findComment-934179 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mongoose87 384 Posted June 27, 2022 Share Posted June 27, 2022 Each Category is graded 0-2: 0 - Bad 1 - Adequate 2 - Excellent Layout: 1.5/2 - The player is in focus, in the foreground, with the design drawing the eye directly to him. However, the arrangement of the text behind part of the background makes it difficult to read. Theme: 2/2 - The comparison of goaltenders to famous walls has been enduring for a reason - it works. Some might call it cliched, but in hockey we call cliched "classic." Creativity: 2/2 - Eschewing common backgrounds of blended colors, patterns or ice, the graphic instead features the remains of the Berlin wall. The text has a distinct worn effect. Polish: 2/2 The edges of the various layers are very clean - certainly cleaner than this reviewer usually manages. I don't see any ghosts or relics. Appeal: 0/2 - Despite demonstrating technical and otherwise being quality work, something about the blurred design next to the liquid pattern makes me motion sick. TOTAL: 7.5/10 leandrofg 1 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/123220-the-berlin-wall-basileus-jute/#findComment-934202 Share on other sites More sharing options...
leandrofg 1,156 Posted June 28, 2022 Author Share Posted June 28, 2022 22 hours ago, Mongoose87 said: Each Category is graded 0-2: 0 - Bad 1 - Adequate 2 - Excellent Layout: 1.5/2 - The player is in focus, in the foreground, with the design drawing the eye directly to him. However, the arrangement of the text behind part of the background makes it difficult to read. Theme: 2/2 - The comparison of goaltenders to famous walls has been enduring for a reason - it works. Some might call it cliched, but in hockey we call cliched "classic." Creativity: 2/2 - Eschewing common backgrounds of blended colors, patterns or ice, the graphic instead features the remains of the Berlin wall. The text has a distinct worn effect. Polish: 2/2 The edges of the various layers are very clean - certainly cleaner than this reviewer usually manages. I don't see any ghosts or relics. Appeal: 0/2 - Despite demonstrating technical and otherwise being quality work, something about the blurred design next to the liquid pattern makes me motion sick. TOTAL: 7.5/10 Thank you for your feedback! I appreciate the constructive criticism. I’ll work on those areas and post a different version here! Mongoose87 1 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/123220-the-berlin-wall-basileus-jute/#findComment-934511 Share on other sites More sharing options...
leandrofg 1,156 Posted June 29, 2022 Author Share Posted June 29, 2022 @Matt thunder, two more versions @Mongoose87, my fellow Hound, check this version with small changes. Does this bump the rating? @Daniel Janser, is this Hoff enough for you? Matt thunder 1 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/123220-the-berlin-wall-basileus-jute/#findComment-934705 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Daniel Janser 2,169 Posted June 29, 2022 Share Posted June 29, 2022 10 minutes ago, leandrofg said: @Daniel Janser, is this Hoff enough for you? Quite so, appreciate that you incorporated it. Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/123220-the-berlin-wall-basileus-jute/#findComment-934707 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mongoose87 384 Posted June 29, 2022 Share Posted June 29, 2022 1 hour ago, leandrofg said: @Matt thunder, two more versions @Mongoose87, my fellow Hound, check this version with small changes. Does this bump the rating? @Daniel Janser, is this Hoff enough for you? Yes, you've perfectly address both of my concerns. Excellent work. Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/123220-the-berlin-wall-basileus-jute/#findComment-934718 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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