Vhlm my all star team to heff

[Boaty 139]

Okay let's start so it's going to be with 3 forwards 2 defense man and 1 goalies so don't be mad ad me that you are not in it I just look ad points and that it's or I look how much games they played so far the forwards are going to be ad number one Jeffrey bezos it's a left winger that I just like and he shoots so much that I think with every shot it's getting probably annoyed for the goalie 652 shots taking the shots lead and 77 assists and  64 goals that makes it a strong forward and a fears one and I just love that and want to see more in the future he going to hef a great career for sure number 2 let's see who it is Larry abbys Jr  he is a fears right winger that see we're to pass the Puck and if it's the right forward than it's a goal and that makes him fears to the ice and he got 52 assists and 28 goals and that are amazing stats and I love to see him in my all star team so it's going to become strong already and that makes it spacial that I do im normally bored but than I had dis idea in a instant so that is why okay let's look ad other players because we need to move on the third player Wil be drum role sunglasses joyo no wonder he is in here but like he is the best center ever in the vhlm right now no wonder he is in my allstar team and that makes it spacial so much spacial okay but his stats are 30 goals and 51 assists and that is just insane stats omg he is a monster of a player exactly all of the players now there really strong and good players it's really insane okay move on to the 2 defense man let's tell you what it means to play defense you need to be strong and a good balance and you need to pass good Allright let's now say the fourth player big Bob he got the name and he got 847 hits and 35 goals and 144 assist that is amazing in that career he makes it happen and he is a icon there just a icon in the vhlm we hopefully going to see more of him in the future now the fifth player is Tater Tottingham he got 112 hits that is amazing he is a Sami truck just strong and 62 assist and 27 goals just a libero and so strong just a strong team all ready and now we going with the goalie it's going to become strong and it's probably really competitive so let's see who is going to become a goalie in the all star team the sixth man is Henry truck Jr he is the best goalie from the 84 seasons so let's see the stats saves 0.906 and the gaa is 2.11 are really good stats I love to see him in the future but right now I'm going to sleep goodnight everyone

[Enorama 2,039]

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