Mook 120 Posted October 8, 2014 Share Posted October 8, 2014 Figured I'd try graphics this week Frank 1 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/13012-claimedokranitz/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
solas 1,951 Posted October 9, 2014 Share Posted October 9, 2014 Effort: 2/2 - Stock work, lighting, text, definitely enough for a full effort grade. Look: 2.25/3 - I'm not too familiar with your work, but you've got a good start here. With some adjustments you can really be going places. First, although I like the render and font choice, I'd personally make the render a bit bigger, and instead of having dark text with a glow behind it, plain white (or any light color) text. Also, some adjustment to the coloring would work here - the yellow-green color in the background stock doesn't work too well, so I'd go with the blue from the render and try to make the sig mostly bluish. Creativity: 1/1 Total: 5.25/6 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/13012-claimedokranitz/#findComment-135036 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mook 120 Posted October 9, 2014 Author Share Posted October 9, 2014 I'm not familiar with my work either Thanks Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/13012-claimedokranitz/#findComment-135069 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Grumpy Bear 347 Posted October 10, 2014 Share Posted October 10, 2014 Effort: 2/2 - Blending, lighting, text, coloring, effects, you definitely have it. Look: 2.25/3 - I'm not a fan of the text to be honest. The render is over-blended and the lighting is weird since the background is so much darker than the render. It sounds like a lot of complaints but as a whole you are on the right track and just need to adjust some finishing details. Creativity: 1/1 - Yeah Total: 5.25/6 Final: 5 Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/13012-claimedokranitz/#findComment-135242 Share on other sites More sharing options...
James 77 Posted November 2, 2014 Share Posted November 2, 2014 Claimed Link to comment https://vhlforum.com/topic/13012-claimedokranitz/#findComment-144601 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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