Boaty 139 Posted May 10, 2023 Share Posted May 10, 2023 (edited) Paard stops with hockey when dochter enters draft class 89,It is a f mess out there,Aurora skylight whent to the press of the universety. Im going to enter the draft and hope i be first overall press: cut te case what happend to youre father Bedirhan how do you know who my dad is press: internet And than a brawl started out it was crazy,People got punchend by aurora it was crazy, press: What is did? Aurora, don't hurt me Don't hurt me, no more Aurora, don't hurt me Don't hurt me, no more Press from the back: oeoeoeoeo oeoeoeoeo oeoeoeoeo I will fing kill you with my hockey stick her team mates try to stop her but with her Horse power she was strong enough to get every Defence player to hold her plus some extra people. it was not enough she made them flying and she was just so mad but than fell asleep. some hours later paard was next to her and said youre okay. and he gave her food while she is tired and still mad but she put her glasses on and whent take off to home, when home took a shower and than did try outs ad Halifax because the maneger wants her on the team with her talent, and when she arives extra early shawn the manager i think it is his name,just made her extra ice laps to warm up, he saw how fast she is as a skater and how amazing she can act with her skill, and her level she need more time to devolep but she is strong trainer like her old man and she going to be a good talent not like her dad but maby lil bit beter with words out of the mouth. im your Hockey girl, I'm livin' in my own world I ain't Bad, call me the best You can't touch me there, you can't touch my skates Unless I say so, im youre hockey girl singing her song like a pro and she was death searius when she sing like a manence her song style is so cool she talks only about hockey, she was after the skate laps doing fast drils and shooting drils to help her real good, she was inpressing the team with her work adic because she can do it all atleast her words, paard also watch her do her training he was silent like a mouse and after that she whent to paard and was sitting with him because she wants her dad and than to the lockerroom and when she was done a knock ad the door and shawn came with the line up and than left. is she going to be starting or not maby bench but who knows like more and we will know what going to happen in part 4 we wil see it so much soon and try to geuse the songs like what song did i use in the story Part 4 coming soon Edited May 10, 2023 by Bedirhan kirbithan, badcolethetitan and sadie 1 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShawnGlade 1,008 Posted May 10, 2023 Share Posted May 10, 2023 Fradin99 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sadie 618 Posted May 10, 2023 Share Posted May 10, 2023 i like how sometimes you used periods, 10/10. Triller, Boaty, Arce and 5 others 5 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Boaty 139 Posted May 10, 2023 Author Share Posted May 10, 2023 41 minutes ago, sadie said: i like how sometimes you used periods, 10/10. You like something but what are periods kirbithan 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Triller 1,456 Posted May 10, 2023 Share Posted May 10, 2023 1 minute ago, Bedirhan said: You like something but what are periods Periods are the dots used at the end of a sentence. <<< Like that. They are used as a way to separate thoughts and give the reader a chance to pause before reading the next sentence. kirbithan 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Triller 1,456 Posted May 10, 2023 Share Posted May 10, 2023 1 hour ago, Bedirhan said: Paard stops with hockey when dochter enters draft class 89,It is a f mess out there,Aurora skylight whent to the press of the universety. Im going to enter the draft and hope i be first overall press: cut te case what happend to youre father Bedirhan how do you know who my dad is press: internet And than a brawl started out it was crazy,People got punchend by aurora it was crazy, press: What is did? Aurora, don't hurt me Don't hurt me, no more Aurora, don't hurt me Don't hurt me, no more Press from the back: oeoeoeoeo oeoeoeoeo oeoeoeoeo I will fing kill you with my hockey stick her team mates try to stop her but with her Horse power she was strong enough to get every Defence player to hold her plus some extra people. it was not enough she made them flying and she was just so mad but than fell asleep. some hours later paard was next to her and said youre okay. and he gave her food while she is tired and still mad but she put her glasses on and whent take off to home, when home took a shower and than did try outs ad Halifax because the maneger wants her on the team with her talent, and when she arives extra early shawn the manager i think it is his name,just made her extra ice laps to warm up, he saw how fast she is as a skater and how amazing she can act with her skill, and her level she need more time to devolep but she is strong trainer like her old man and she going to be a good talent not like her dad but maby lil bit beter with words out of the mouth. im your Hockey girl, I'm livin' in my own world I ain't Bad, call me the best You can't touch me there, you can't touch my skates Unless I say so, im youre hockey girl singing her song like a pro and she was death searius when she sing like a manence her song style is so cool she talks only about hockey, she was after the skate laps doing fast drils and shooting drils to help her real good, she was inpressing the team with her work adic because she can do it all atleast her words, paard also watch her do her training he was silent like a mouse and after that she whent to paard and was sitting with him because she wants her dad and than to the lockerroom and when she was done a knock ad the door and shawn came with the line up and than left. is she going to be starting or not maby bench but who knows like more and we will know what going to happen in part 4 we wil see it so much soon and try to geuse the songs like what song did i use in the story Part 4 coming soon Hopefully we get to see the calm and cool side of Aurora soon! We can tell she is very strong and great at hockey but hopefully she can stay focused and help encourage and maybe even lead her team! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Boaty 139 Posted May 10, 2023 Author Share Posted May 10, 2023 20 minutes ago, Triller said: Periods are the dots used at the end of a sentence. <<< Like that. They are used as a way to separate thoughts and give the reader a chance to pause before reading the next sentence. Thx for youre explain im not so good with english not naitive AJW and Triller 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Boaty 139 Posted May 10, 2023 Author Share Posted May 10, 2023 16 minutes ago, Triller said: Hopefully we get to see the calm and cool side of Aurora soon! We can tell she is very strong and great at hockey but hopefully she can stay focused and help encourage and maybe even lead her team! She wil groeien up after her first season Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vincentlg2007 466 Posted May 10, 2023 Share Posted May 10, 2023 (edited) How do I apply to be a journalist at those press conference ? Edited May 10, 2023 by vincentlg2007 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Triller 1,456 Posted May 10, 2023 Share Posted May 10, 2023 5 minutes ago, Bedirhan said: Thx for youre explain im not so good with english not naitive No worries, you can always ask for help. Lots of people here know what they are talking about so we can give you feedback that might even help improve your English if you are ok with that! 6 minutes ago, Bedirhan said: She wil groeien up after her first season Young players do take some time to grow! She seems like a hard worker so I'm sure she will become a positive leader for her team! Boaty 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vincentlg2007 466 Posted May 10, 2023 Share Posted May 10, 2023 Also as a fellow member of the vhlm environment i'd request we investigate on Skylight for steroids abuse Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Boaty 139 Posted May 10, 2023 Author Share Posted May 10, 2023 18 minutes ago, vincentlg2007 said: How do I apply to be a journalist at those press conference ? In the paard univers you need to be there a band member of the press team and need to know every instrument and need to know how to sing 9 minutes ago, vincentlg2007 said: Also as a fellow member of the vhlm environment i'd request we investigate on Skylight for steroids abuse She is nat and she got paard genes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vincentlg2007 466 Posted May 10, 2023 Share Posted May 10, 2023 4 minutes ago, Bedirhan said: In the paard univers you need to be there a band member of the press team and need to know every instrument and need to know how to sing She is nat and she got paard genes i'm really got at signing and can play every instrument. Also i'm in a band Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Boaty 139 Posted May 10, 2023 Author Share Posted May 10, 2023 3 minutes ago, vincentlg2007 said: i'm really got at signing and can play every instrument. Also i'm in a band Im going to think about it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Boaty 139 Posted May 10, 2023 Author Share Posted May 10, 2023 14 minutes ago, Spartan said: They cant play Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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