San Diego Marlins Graphic

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[Steve 1,925]

Multi renders are very hard to pull off. You did an amazing job. 

[jhatty8 671]

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Really like this. The composition and the way you staggered the renders/shapes/text is near perfect and the colors bring everything together. I also love the extra details you put into this, such as the shadows underneath the front render and the smoke effect only being applied to the back render so that more pronunciation is placed on the front. The text is clean, a bit uninspired, but it does the job. Only major critique would be the players being too bright, especially the head of the back render. Might be some clashing with the smoke effect?

 

9.5/10, great work

[jfaly 69]

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This is a really nice graphic! The multi-player graphic is super solid, and neither of the renders take away from the other. The fade on the upper image is super nice, and the smoke/vapour surrounding it looks almost heavenly in nature. The geometric background was an excellent choice, and draws attention to the render at points of focus which is an often overlooked part of composition. A critique I have is that the contrast on the renders is a little too high, it makes the players faces look oversaturated, and the visor on the background render is cloudy and unclarified because of it. The jerseys would also look nicer with yellow highlights, like the Marlins logo, but that's more of a nitpick than anything else. 

 

Overall: 9/10, all the issues are nitpicky and personal preference. Incredible graphic!