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Effort: 2/2 - Stock work, text etc. It's all there.

 

Look: 2.5/3 - Couple things that's would really help this sig. First, the text. It's decent but kind of stark, maybe a colour that matches a bit more would have helped (dark blue). Next is the contrast on the render..next time drop a Brightness & Contrast adjustment layer above the render and set it to a clipping mask so it only affects the render. Bump up the contrast on it so it pops a bit more.

 

Creativity: 1/1 - Nice stock work and composition.

 

Total: 5.5/6

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Effort: 2/2 - Definitely enough.

Look: 2.5/3 - I like the stock work and background that you started with here, but I'll agree that the contrast on the render just isn't high enough. It takes away from the blending, and like Jackim said, it doesn't really pop. With a more contrasted render, I think the text will look much better - I'd just suggest making it a bit larger and lowering the spacing between "Jack" and "Harkness".

Creativity: 1/1

Total: 5.5/6

FINAL GRADE: 6/6

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