nikkurri17 109 Posted November 14, 2014 Share Posted November 14, 2014 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Grumpy Bear 347 Posted November 16, 2014 Share Posted November 16, 2014 Effort: 1.5/2 - It's really just a background, logo, render and text unless you cut the render as well. I know you just started and are working with the GIMP so I'll go easy on you. Look: 1.5/3 - We need to get you working on Blending/stock work and lighting. I will go over some stuff in the locker room with you after I get GIMP and find out how to use it. Overall you want your render at the 1/3rd mark in the sig where you're more over in the corner. The text should slightly overlap the render so as to keep a solid focal point where as now you hve a triangle between the render, the text and the logo which makes your eyes dart everywhere. That's all for now, Like I said I will get some stuff up in the locker room for you. Creativity: 1/1 - Yeah, just starting out, it's all creative. Total: 4/6 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nikkurri17 109 Posted November 16, 2014 Author Share Posted November 16, 2014 (edited) actually I don't even know how to use gimp lol this is work I did on a photo editing website. Appreciate the tips though, there's a lot I can take from that one paragraph to improve my work. Edited November 16, 2014 by nikkurri17 Mr. Grumpy Bear 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
701 309 Posted November 17, 2014 Share Posted November 17, 2014 Effort: 1.5/2 - I'm with bushito in the fact of that this looks like minimal work. Look: 1.5/3 - Since you use a photo editor, that should tell you why it isn't the best. I like the fact of that you put him on the ice though. Creativity: 1/1 - I'll give you it. Total: 4/6 FINAL 4 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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