Claimed:Graves. Not graves, Graves! [Final: 5]

[Paramorise 255]

[solas 1,951]

Effort: 2/2 - Stock work, text, jersey change. That's enough for

Look: 2.5/3 - You've got a solid start here - I like the stock work that you have, but I would make a couple suggestions. First, I'd suggest changing the text. It's too far away from the render (maybe make everything from the A onwards overlap with the render), plus I think it would look better without any transparency and in a light gray color. Also, maybe sharpen the render and move it to the right a bit to leave less space on the left. If you keep working with that and maybe add a few more stocks that fit and some lighting on the right side of the render, it could look really nice.

Creativity: 1/1

Total: 5.5/6

Edited December 6, 2014 by solas

[Mr. Grumpy Bear 347]

Effort 2/2: Blending, coloring, text, stock work, you have it

Look 2.25/3: It's washed out, the coloring is a bit strange to me and the text is hard to read. Aside from that you have good blending and stock work. I am really on the fence about this one but the lighting is what pushes it below 5.5 for me. 

Creativity 1/1: Yup

Overall 5.25/6

 

 

 

Final: 5

Edited December 7, 2014 by Bushito

[Kendrick 4,741]

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