Claimed:Pablo Escabar: Big Man On Campus (Biography) [Final 10/10]

[Laflamme 376]

Pablo Escabar
Position: Defence
Handedness: Right
Jersey Number: 17
Height: 6'6"
Weight: 250 lbs.

Childhood
 

Pablo Escabar was conceived in Mexico, although born in Canada. The son of Jose and Papi Escabar. Pablo's parents wanted out of Mexico so they snuck across the border and made their way to a little town in Ontario named Peterborough. Pablo and his family thought they were safe in Canada, but Pablo's fathers drug friends were constantly following them. They had they fear of being caught everyday and dragged back to Mexico, where they would be executed for running away. The fear got to be too much that when Pablo was five, his father said enough is enough. What was done next, was all that could be done. The little five year olds daddy went to prison for two counts of first degree murder. Years passed where Pablo had to live without a dad, eventually he found a hobby that took his mind off it all. At age seven, Pablo Escabar was introduced to the game of ice hockey. At first he wanted to quit, he was always falling down and getting so frustrated that his anger would over power his judgement. Coaches would take one on one time to help Pablo control his anger, nothing they did helped. It did not take the coaches nor Pablo's mom to long to realize that his anger could be a positive and motivating thing. Pablo was put on the defensive position of the team, where he was taught to hit with his body. The play of his game became unstoppable, he was scary and intimidating.

High School

 

The older Pablo got, the bigger and stronger he got as well. In his junior year at Adam Scott C.V.I., he was named captain of the team. Being awarded the team captain helped Pablo build his Leadership skills on and off the ice. This made him a better and mentally stronger person and player. It was in his senior year that he grew an undying love for the spotlight. When cameras were aiming at him , he pushed that much harder making it hard for anyone to take their eyes off him. At the end of Pablo's senior year he had won the championship twice, been awarded most valuable player three times and had a contact list of college scouts.

University

 

Scholarships were being sent to Pablo very rapidly and in bulk. There was a huge decision to be made, on where he wanted to play and attend school. After three long weeks he finally made his decision. Where he would be playing for the next four years would be, Boston University. Pablo social life in university went down hill, although it was his personal choice. All his friends were into partying and getting high, but Pablo just wanted to focus on his game. In his first season they did not even make the playoffs, it was very stressful on Pablo and he began to get irritated. When the off season came, Pablo spent double the time in the training room. If you could not find him in the gym then he was on the ice doing drills over and over trying to perfect them. When the second season game he was raring to go. Finishing the season, Pablo had thirty goals and forty assists. Boston was awarded State Champs, finishing undefeated. That was the last season Pablo played in University hockey, a miracle happened for him.

National Hockey League

 

The Boston Bruins general manager could stand watching such good talent being held back. Watching every single one of Pablo's games he saw the passion and inspiration.
Pablo got a phone call at three am on the morning of August 14th/2012, it was the Boston general manger offering Pablo a contract to play for them as a first liner. This was a dream come true for Pablo. Making the big leagues was all he ever wanted. After three seasons with the Boston Bruins, Pablo just was not fully satisfied. There was even more to his game he wanted to show the world. There was only one possible league above the national league he could join. Pablo had his agents put an application in for the Victory Hockey League (VHL).

Victory Hockey League ( Minors)



Pablo worked his tail off for two weeks, trying to prove himself. After the long and stressful draft, Pablo went sixteenth overall to the Ottawa Lynx. The season has not started yet but workouts are intense and Pablo is playing in the Pro Cup. To learn where Pablo Escabar's destiny next follow him on the forums!

Pros

 

Defence - Pablo is really confident on defence and does the right plays at the right time. Not afraid to throw himself in front of a shot, or throw his weight around to stop a play. Poke checking is not an issue for Pablo, he loves intercepting the puck. Most importantly, he loves shutting down star players.

Skating- Compared in speed with the superhero the Flash, Pablo is very quick on his feet. Mother had him skating since he was eight. Always found where he is needed and never falling behind the play.

Scoring- Pablo has a very strong and accurate shot. Goals are not a issue for him. Most goalies fear him for the power of his slap shot. Pablo can be found pinching in plays when he can see a opening or great chance to put the puck in the net.

Cons

 

Fighting- Fighting is not one of Pablo's strong skills. Pablo has a tendency of getting to angry to the point where he loses judgement. Getting angry in a fight only makes things worse. Pablo needs to work on controlling the fight while being calm and patient.

 
Discipline- Pablo is in search for his inner peace, but until then he loves taking his anger out on the opposing team. It puts him in the sin bin and does not help his team when they are on the penalty kill. This year Pablo will be working on controlling his anger with a anger management councillor.

Experience- Pablo is new to the forum based simulated leagues, but he is willing to put in the time to learn and improve. This skill will take longer than the others but it will be the most valuable.

Edited February 14, 2015 by Pablo

[DollarAndADream 3,356]

Overview: 5/5 - You hit the word mark exactly as asked. It was a great Bio to read.

 

Grammar: 3/3 - I don't want to dock you because you're new and learning about everything. Note all of the mistakes on your grammar and try to improve. It's also a lengthy biography, so sometimes the amount of errors can be swept aside. There's a good amount of little mistakes, like missing apostrophes, the correct use of when to use AN or A, or the correct use of TO and TOO.

 

"Pablo's fathers" - Pablo's father's

"They had they fear " - they had the fear

"The little five year olds daddy" - The little five year old's daddy

"over power his judgement" - overpower

"Pablo's mom to long to " - too long to

"Pablo social life in university went down hill" - Pablo's

"When the second season game" - When the second season came

"The Boston Bruins general manager could stand" - couldn't stand

"Boston general manger" - general manager

"national league" - National Hockey League

"To learn where Pablo Escabar's destiny next" - destiny takes him next,

"Always found where he is needed and never falling behind the play." - He is always found

"Goals are not a issue for him" - goals are not AN issue for him

"he can see a opening" - can see AN opening

"getting to angry to the point" - getting too angry to the point

"with a anger management councillor." - with AN anger management COUNSELLOR

 

 

Presentation: 1/1 - Tons of good pictures used in here. Great work.

 

Over 1000 Words? 1/1

 

Overall: 10/10

 

 

Good luck with the career, Pablo! Great start on the quick Biography and Rookie Profile.

[Frank 5,209]

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